Remember: Helpful details are signal. Extra details are noise. Class words: Remove the noise.
On Thursday afternoon it started to rain. Sarah put on her red raincoat and her yellow boots. She also packed a long shopping list in her bag: milk, bread, apples, cheese, and orange juice. She walked to the car and opened the door with her left hand. Then she put the shopping bags on the back seat. When she tried to start the car, she could not find her keys. She looked under the seat. She looked in her coat pockets. She looked in her bag next to the apples. Finally she saw the keys on the roof of the car. She had put them there for one second while she closed the door, and then she forgot them in the rain.
These details are noise. You can delete them and still understand the story:
These details are signal. Keep them — they tell us what really happened:
One sentence only: Sarah forgot her keys on the roof of the car after she put them there for a moment.